tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.comments2010-03-24T18:40:41.434+13:00Room 3http://www.blogger.com/profile/00329181334750304109noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-43674506557276192612010-03-24T18:40:41.429+13:002010-03-24T18:40:41.429+13:00nice going FrankieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-40042776083529345902009-11-29T21:37:48.121+13:002009-11-29T21:37:48.121+13:00Lucia, you have thought of lots of details to make your story more interesting. I like the way you worked on hearing and writing all your sounds by yourself.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-24254145392545147182009-11-29T21:35:18.097+13:002009-11-29T21:35:18.097+13:00Sophie, I like the way you came back to your story and added more details so your readers get a really good idea of what Alison is like.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-15572002060890423682009-11-17T17:41:59.758+13:002009-11-17T17:41:59.758+13:00Kanika, you have worked so hard on your story about Telah. You are doing a great job at hearing the sounds you need.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-48798317554495673512009-11-16T22:29:04.933+13:002009-11-16T22:29:04.933+13:00Frankie and Ashley, I like the way you have explained some of the reasons why you are good friends. You have thought carefully about each other and worked very hard on your writing and artwork.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-2357370882466055952009-11-16T22:27:52.253+13:002009-11-16T22:27:52.253+13:00Liam, your story creates a great picture in my mind. You have worked hard to write words you know and hear the sounds you needed.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-72630320631486290862009-11-09T17:44:10.129+13:002009-11-09T17:44:10.129+13:00I know you take very good care of Binty, Adam. I like the way you were able to return to your writing after the weekend and add some more detail.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-38916468663638305012009-11-08T09:59:28.835+13:002009-11-08T09:59:28.835+13:00What an exciting Blog you have Miss Lynagh. I love hearing your children talk about what they do at school on Voice Thread and I love the pictures and writing they are doing on the computer. Your Blog is awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-42722406228933999142009-11-05T19:07:04.666+13:002009-11-05T19:07:04.666+13:00Shea, you have worked so hard on your writing about Ra. Your stories are very interesting and I can't wait to read what you write next.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-55342129858447860162009-11-05T19:02:03.156+13:002009-11-05T19:02:03.156+13:00Sometimes crickets can give me a fright too. Robbie, you were such a focused writer and did a great job at adding some more detail to your first idea.Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-7029418550387570052009-11-05T18:51:48.504+13:002009-11-05T18:51:48.504+13:00Koryl, your story makes me think you have a lot of fun with your Poppa. I like the way you wrote "I laugh to my Poppa".Miss Lynaghnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8660631302618859827.post-7734604383264601642009-10-27T20:25:13.327+13:002009-10-27T20:25:13.327+13:00What a wonderful class you have, Miss Lynagh - and a wonderful Blog. well done - you are very clever!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com